Fiction Imrahil's short stories

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    Imrahil Thirtheenth Spawning

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    A word from the author:

    At first I had the idea to link the theme to a story about seasons or the cycles of the moon and Lizardmen worshiping the Old One of the moon. But no structure for a story came to me. After putting that aside I focused on putting a cycle within the story itself.
    This resulted in my entry.

    Me reviewing me:
    A weak point in my story is for me the memory of the protagonist... somehow he does not remember that the sequence is starting over every time.
    I am not sure if you all feel that way too, or that it is not that significant to make the story work?

    Grrr, !mrahil
     
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    Imrahil Thirtheenth Spawning

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    Words of review:

    Thanks for your review. I that you picked up on my idea with the story :)
    Through your review I noticed that the Coin's Spin probably would be yours: ... not with philosophy or symbolism

    It is a shame there are not more reviews done or shared

    Grrr, !mrahil
     
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