Ive always played with wierd styles, but they always worked out for me so here is my list Slann mage priest; bsb, general sceptre of sability obsidian amule arabyan carpet Focus of mystery higher state of consciousness the becalming cogitation the focused rumitation Scar veteran; light armour burning blades of chotec the maiming shield Skink priest; Lvl 1 dispel scroll 30 warriors full command 4x10 skirmishers with javalin 8 chamelions 7 chamelions stegadon stegadon stegadon let me know
slann cant use carpet according to FAQ, because "he is not really on foot" it sure is a weird army, and i guess most of us would give the advice "go back to the drawing table", but since you said you like playing weird styles... i am not sure what type of feedback you want. Since you cant use the carpet, get the crown of command. then your slann can hold up even most death stars in combat. also, the sceptre of stability isnt very good. better get the cube of darkness instead. maiming shield is laughable for the scar vet. give him some proper armour instead. you sure have lots of ways planned on how to stall the enemy, but how do you plan to win? i can easily see you losing by killing your opponents fast units while he kills yours, and you have 100p more fast units than him you have one combat unit, but it is not aggressive enough to single handedly kill the enemy. stegadons are great for locking down standard infantry, but again that would probably result in a total deadlock of the battle. sure you could be lucky/good and get off a combo charge with sauruses and one or two stegadons, but since that really is your only weapon, it could easily be foreseen and negated.
I would try to finagle your list to replace one of those stegadons with an engine of the gods for your priest. You'll have to cut a few points elsewhere obviously. Also, you may as well split those two units of chameleons into three units of five.