Try to report more next time, this isn't an actual report at all.
To give you a hand:
-Write down a small intro, how many points, scenario, who you're playing, if he's experienced, what army, what style of army (horde, gunline, MSU...). Small talk really.
-Army lists. Give a (rough) layout of the army lists you and your opponent used. This helps to picture the armies that are facing eachother.
-Give an overview of the field: what terrain is there, where are the units set up.
example:
There are 2 woods and a hill, my opponent had the hill, a big wood near the center-right and a small wood in the bottom-left corner. From left to right (my point of view): skinks, terradons, Saurus spears, TG+slann, skinks screening the TG, Kroxigor, EotG and skinks.
-Give an overview to how the battle went, what were the critical points in the game? Did you make any big errors? did your opponent?
Preferably a turn-by-turn report, this helps to clear things up a lot.
-Keep it short, don't type every detail. Only the important ones.
example: My whole line moves up, only the EotG stays back a little. Magic kills handfull of swordsmen, his dispells were really good. Shooting is out of range and there is no close combat.
That's an example of a (pretty) short (fictional) turn 1.
-Result. Post the result at the end of the report. Did you score a massacre? or was it a close draw.
-Analysis. Post your post-game analysis, what do you think went wrong/right? What will you do differently next time...etc..
Edit: try not to use any Internet-language/speaking language: Mah isn't really good english. I suggest you use 'my'
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Good luck!
The Hunted
