Don't take what @spawning of Bob has said as a bad thing, he is not bashing you but being constructive and pointing you in a direction you may not...
Do you do a lot of commissions? I have thought about starting to do some but unsure if there is a need.
I used to be on the dinner table but now I have my own man loft but it is somewhat cramped with unfinished projects that need finishing!
I think you would have to write it as the soul reclaiming itself or could you say another Slann is taking the soul of that Seraphon?, I think if...
Even longer for me, might have to dust it off and reread.
Slacker :D