Excusa meesa, but I said the first statement in reaction to Esurc saying he had posted the next story but, when looking, I found nought but the fragile remains of my self.
@Kcibrihp-Esurc I like the new edits. I'm glad you took on the advice for geographical locations, it might become a bit redundant when the characters converge on similar locations on The Island (I suppose you could include the locations as sub-headings within each chapter rather than next to each character's name then) but it helps the reader to keep the narrative coherent. Good stuff
I'm currently doing 'Strange Alliances' Don't worry too much about time, it'll be out by tomorrow at the latest (Hopefully) so there won't be as big a wait as for the original piece, it is easier to edit existing ones than add new ones!