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Fiction Old Enemies

Scalenex said:
Don't rush the artist. I'd rather get slow gems than fast pyrite. As Slanputin said before he contradicted himself.
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Excusa meesa, but I said the first statement in reaction to Esurc saying he had posted the next story but, when looking, I found nought but the fragile remains of my self.
 
@Kcibrihp-Esurc I like the new edits. I'm glad you took on the advice for geographical locations, it might become a bit redundant when the characters converge on similar locations on The Island (I suppose you could include the locations as sub-headings within each chapter rather than next to each character's name then) but it helps the reader to keep the narrative coherent.

Good stuff :)
 
I'm currently doing 'Strange Alliances'
Don't worry too much about time, it'll be out by tomorrow at the latest (Hopefully) so there won't be as big a wait as for the original piece, it is easier to edit existing ones than add new ones!
 
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