No idea how this happened given I was copy and pasting... think I have fixed it
PS. Bowser if you have read through all this I expect you to like every single post :)
Thanks very much and I will definitely check out that poem!
I think even saying an introduction is generous. It reads sort of like a fable you drop in conversation. "Don't be too hasty to go to war, because...
Thanks mate! Really appreciate the kind words.
Yeah it was supposed to be an old man, young daughter style thing. It was supposed to hint that making a family to him had never been a priority....
Did my review of my own work influence you? Oh I feel dirty.... "who trusts the reader to take the story further." twice as dirty....
Love love love this! Funny and drops a hint I agree with... could go on for longer.
Thanks Bowser, I love it when people get the same message out of it as I did.
Yeah, as noted this was a super rush job for me. Really hoping to put more effort in next time.
Thank you or the feedback, yes I wish I could have expanded on it more. Throwing in Lizardmen as a setting rather than as characters was a gambit,...
A Whimper Another day walking after many months, I figured this jungle would probably kill me. Everything had made so much sense when I left the...
Haha yeah she is a little cutie. Definitely worth the wait. :)
A Whimper was written by me when I was in study mode, having 3 exams right after the deadline. My own daughter (first) was due a few weeks after...
Personally I think ties are great. No reason we can't have multiple winners.
Meanwhile we still have a draw!
It's a shame you can't vote like 5 votes to story x, 4 votes to story y, 3 votes to story z etc.
Yup agree with Pendrake
I have voted for less in the past. Most don't like it, but it is 'up to' five. I didn't this time around. I understand your sentiments, voting for...
Great stuff. I like going backwards to 1st, as I would imagine the people down the list would have to wait a long time for most of their reviews.