Story Plans 2 - Plot Mapping So, I have a vague idea of the key characters from my character mapping of Blinqi. Obviously I have one or two...
You and me both, gramps.
I still seem to be craving cheese.
I feel confused, too. I must be a hero like Tintua! Tintua's hypervigilance sounds like a medication side effect I had sometime last year. I...
Story Plans 1 - Character Mapping I was planning to shut up in this thread for a while because I have a stifling voice. I sound too much like an...
Overall, this is a pretty strong piece of history - I like. I cautiously hit the Bob-edit button. These days it mostly seems to untangle long...
♥I was always your biggest fan, Slanputin♥ It occurred to me that a casual observer might think, "Poor Bob - people are really hacking into him....
The weakness of 13 is a deliberate plot device. It will distract you from how awful 14 is.... All of your points are extremely valid within the...
Chapter 14. The Novices It was the imperative to blend in alone that drove the two saurus warriors to the Order of Purity. Once they were among...
Except you don't have to eat the other prisoners! * * If you also play skaven, you can choose to eat the other prisoners later if you get the...
Any snake eye orderers: Snake Eye have 83 on order (as at last Tues) - needs 100 All of you who ordered Snake eyes - bump your order up by 20% -...
In truth I have been almost the opposite of industrious. The entire book has been complete (in draft) since about November last year (book 2 is...
What? No hat? Start over.
Mushroom Surprise?
Its not my fault. Rikard started it
Sorry, @Kcibrihp-Esurc, I spelled her name wrong - "Ardaris" is the correct spelling. If pain persists, please see a brain surgeon.
I think it is simply a case of converting the existing fly by dropping wings and adding tail. I personally would like to see @Deusvult licking a...
That was terrifying.
Chapter 13. The New Arrivals As fast as the hunters could travel, they discovered that news travelled faster. A gaggle of curious children...
Whoa. Slann-like power with no moral or practical constraints. Houston, we have a problem. ("Their population is nearing at an end. Even with...