Okay we are posting responses to critques here? Okay here goes: I just love this review! And I'm sorry to hear about your failed attempt to rule...
Okay thanks so much for this. Although I only had 4 votes, I am pleased that my story seems to have stuck with some people. Sword = phallic =...
Yes I think that my stories may not suit the short story format. Once you read one you tend to go straight to the next. But anyway, thanks for the...
Wow what a great review. I'm on my phone at the moment but I will go over fully later. Thanks for such effort in the write up!
hahahaha classic bob!
Trinity I stared at reflection in my sword. The years had only made me sharper. As a champion of the mighty Slann As'cloxi I led a large block...
I thought mine might have been the easiest to spot, but then, it seems everyone thought that about theirs. I'll open a thread soon and address...
Great critique there Bob but no more cryptic guesses? Yes I am gagging for phase three. It is weird not being able to discuss the critique given...
Great write up Bowser. Now just waiting for Bob's opus. No cryptic guesses this time? I was thinking mine was rather easy to work out.
i need to play some hero quest
glad i continue to rail against the age of copyright bow'xa likes everyone, hahaha
Now that is something I hadn't considered. Obviously they would understand life cycles, given their knowledge of lustrian animals. But to them it...
This thread is mighty quiet at the moment, where are the rest of the critiques? :)
*drools*
Also - thedarkfourth I absolutely loved the review of my work
There are a few different ways that are correct. Despite what thedarkfourth said, seperating by a blank like is definitely not correct. Unless it...
Cool - well I have finished and voted, my awards for 3,2,1 go: (yes i am aware this isn't how the voting works but this is how i am doing my...
Half way through and so far they have all been really good. I think "The Coward" has jumped out at me, and will likely be getting one of my five...