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Fiction Esurciverse Choose your own Adventure

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See, @spawning of Bob it's not an attention grab.

You walk casually out the gates of the Skyre engineer's fortress, counting down in his head. "Is it done?" The Warlock asks.
"Wait." You answer, and you both stand in silence for a moment then the entire fortress explodes. You hold you paw out, and he hands over a pouch of warpstone tokens.

What do you do next?
 
You take the pouch of money and wave your hand in an exaggerated arc. The Warlock looked confused for a moment, just before the Black Skaven behind him plunged his Weeping Blades through his throat. The Skaven tried to screech, but only coughed out blood, and fell to the ground, sliding off the blades. Thronk quickly went through his pockets, and took his possessions. "It would be best if we split up." He hissed, and you nodd. You both walk away from the corpse in opposite directions, and soon disappear into the crowds.

What do you do next?
 
Kcibrihp-Esurc said:
You take the pouch of money and wave your hand in an exaggerated arc. The Warlock looked confused for a moment, just before the Black Skaven behind him plunged his Weeping Blades through his throat. The Skaven tried to screech, but only coughed out blood, and fell to the ground, sliding off the blades. Thronk quickly went through his pockets, and took his possessions. "It would be best if we split up." He hissed, and you nodd. You both walk away from the corpse in opposite directions, and soon disappear into the crowds.

What do you do next?
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Detonate a micro bomb that was in the pockets of the warlock that you had planted there earlier, but is now in the silken pockets of the assassin
 
Offer him more warpstone, drop it - whoopsie! - and smack him in the head as he bends over to get it. Then loot his unconscious body, slit his throat and take back your corrupting warpstone. Leave soon, as otherwise your master will get cranky...
 
I hate you, MurderousCactus.

You turn back and begin to travel in the direction Thronk had gone, the filth covered floor slippery beneath your paws. You hear a chittering screech and the laughter of something other than a Skaven. You rush towards the sound, the laughter continuing, and climb up a rough hewn wall, and see a dozen stormvermin surrounding an emaciated elf. It sits in Thronk's rib cavity, blood covering it's hands, laughing maniacally as it toys with his organs.

What do you do?
 
Get inspired to build the greatest skaven Mech/exoskeleton ever! Also the messiest. Inspiration is weird like that.
 
Could someone A. Post something that doesn't take a Skaven's lifetime to complete and B. Post something I don't read with a Gollum voice *coughs* RoseThorn *coughs*
Also @Ixt are you serious? Because I'll write it if you are. Also hi-five who?
 
Okay, if this is going to work. You can't have four people make a suggestion after each installment. So everyone take their turn.

Also, it would help if people made suggestions like. "I want the character to decide ______" and not "BLOW IT ALL UP!" Choose your own adventure choices are about character actions, not Michael Bay's scenery actions.

Also if this is going to be a story with a beginning, middle, and end with a semblance of structure, @Kcibrihp-Esurc you are going to need to write more than a paragraph each installment so the story goes somewhere beyond the literal rewriting of your last suggestion. I suggest you aim for 800-1200 words or so each block.
 
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I find myself agreeing with the admin. Part of the reason it's so slow is I'm not writing enough, and also it would be nice if you guys were slightly more helpful.
 
Okay, approach it, ask it if it killed Thronk, if no ask it what did. If yes ask it why.
Also try to figure out it's gender, and describe it.
But yeah, talk to it lots, then possibly kill it, or keep it.
 
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